All Comments on 'Family Matters'

... and am rarely disappointed. They have a naturalism and casual ease, an assured voice, that tells always enough but not too much. The characters' narrative voices are distinct and draw me in. I forget about the author, the puppet-master behind the scenes pulling the strings. That's a good thing.

here's1st.offhere's - didn't read entire story only quickly skimmed over

certain points ........................... now that's been said - i've really do wanna

enjoy story [ however you've made everything just so damn confuse ] ........

their talking each other about her uncle Bill " than suddenly " their talking

about Dylan " than suddenly " she says her friend she's virgin " than suddenly "

her friend sex romping her uncle out by the pool open public like nothing

really matter ............................................................... if continue don't make

real confuse like what you did this story :-) :-)