All Comments on 'Family of Three'

I hope you'll continue this one. There are lots of possibilities. Thanks.

Please continue

A terrific effort, well written. The descriptives had me sitting on the edge of my seat. I can't wait for another installment, if you feel the urge to continue.

Please!

more please

I really enjoyed it, you take your time building up to the sex and I love your descriptive narrative. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

I admire your psyche, to have imagined and written such a wonderfully erotic story. I'm going to read more, and be wishing that you continue letting your imagination flow through your fingers and onto these pages.

What a great story with wonderfully discriptive actions. You open the minds and sensations of your captive readers so they and only they are experiencing each hot sensation of the you write about as it happens!