All Comments on '"Family Play": Brother's Lucky Day'

Fine story and marvellous illustrations. Thanks

So fucking sucking depraved and decadent absolutely ott fabulous. I will be playing this story out with my two live in fuck buddies and the friendly milf from next door,if and when the mother joins I have another milf friend who will join us, all of us fucking each other to oblivion, to insane levels of sexual pleasure, so intense that we pass out and start over as soon as we recover, about 5 mins the first time. The time lapse getting longer after each multi fucking and multi cumming session. More and more like this and soon with mummy joining the outrageous sex sessions. Cunt lapping sex maniac U K.

ho hum pretty ordinary you need to write a few more bitch story very predictable

Has to be hands down the best story I've ever readh

Yes write up the story of how the mom is turned into a 3 hole cum slut for her son, daughter and her daughter's friends. But I also think adding Karen seducing her brother and father, while Gemma's mother is added to the incest would be fun as well, with the 3 men, the two brothers & dad triple penetrating all 5 women one at a time.

Three incestuous families getting freaky with each other would be cool, when Karen tries to get the guys to be bisexual, they should then turn the tables on her, making her their sub in front of the other 4 women, with her daddy disciplining her, then having his son and Kody finish her off.

Most guys get violent when someone tries to force something up their assholes, and not violent in a good way, with some holding grudges and getting vicious revenge that sometimes goes too far. So, for God sake do not make the men in this series gay like you have been doing in your stories lately. Use some other story line to exercise your gay male fetishes.

When I was in prison one guy tried to fuck my asshole, he is dead today, as is his homo friends who were egging him on, when he tried to ass rape me in the showers.

Your work is truly amazing and you are easily one of the top five best writers if not top 3 on this site right now. Can't wait for chapter 2 of this story or for any of your work, it is all amazing and fun to read. I personally have a story idea that I want you suggest to you but afraid to

Yes this was your hottest story this year. Hell yes I want to see more.

Sequels. Several. Mommy joining in, Gemma’s mother joining in, the blonde becoming her family’s fuck toy, then the Bergs and Gemma’s mother follow the kids to college and buy a home.

I absolutely loved your story and once again your great story was wonderfully enhanced with fantastic illustrations. I would love to see sequels that involved both the mother and the whole gang over the summer and I would love to see sequels that involved a more intimate look at Kody and Gemma's relationship when they are away at college. Some stories deserve 6 stars and yours is certainly one of them.

SSL, by far your best yet and I’ve read all of them multiple times.

Only one thing to add, MORE!

great story only thing missing is one of the pictures.

on page 4, after ";was all Kody could muster as he felt his balls empty.", and before "Fuck, he shoots buckets,".

probably labeled "silkstockingslover_family-play-brothers-lucky-day29"

I loved this story very much with all the illustrations.please continue this story especially with the mother now seeing what her daughter and friends do while she's at work then maybe you can include all the mothers into the story then kody would have his own harem of women to play with.

Sequels with mom given a lot of assignments.

Great story and looking forward to the next part.

This was very hot! The illustrations were pretty cool too :)

I need a part 2. I always love all your stories, but for some reason I always love your illustrated stories so much more.

I would love to read more about the adventures of this group over the course of the summer, with Gemma and Kody becoming more of a couple, while Olivia becomes hopelessly addicted to her brother's cock, and Karen pursues the mother as her new MILF slut. Then ending the summer with an orgy involving everyone.

Keep the stories coming.

Honestly I appreciate the length! I'm glad you took your time to have everything flow the way that it did rather than just an instant gratification scenario. Look forward to a part II! Very well written!

An excellent story, one of your top 3 this year. Would definitely like to see a sequel along the lines previously suggested (more family fun, fun with the other families, mom becomes a naughty nurse, Karen’s backstory). I would also enjoy exploring the hinted-at burgeoning relationship between Kody and Gemma, maybe she “shares” him with her college friends/lady professors. Or maybe a flashback to the first time the girls got together.

As always, keep up the good work. I know you find it challenging to write sequels, but hopefully you will find creative inspiration to continue this story. Looking forward to your newest creations!

Kind of off-topic, but do you create the CGI pictures yourself, or do you use an illustrator? I usually prefer the hand-drawn pictures that accompany your works, but the last few CGI-illustrated stories have seen a marked improvement in quality, much more realistic. Whoever your illustrator is, kudos! Also, just out of curiosity, how long does it take to illustrate a story?

And we are right there with him. What a wonderful story and wonderful experience. I love the characters, normally not a fan of art work, but these are Fabulous. Looking forward to reading .many more tales from this talented author.

Please don’t take so long to publish ur stories

I miss masturbating while reading them

The vivid illustration.

It was a great story and I would like to read more of it.

One idea is to have Karen coach Kody about seducing his mother. She thinks Kody has potential to be a dom and decide to help him dominate his mother if he shares. She always wanted a man equal to her (in theory but she prefers if she is a little more on top) to play with sluts (nothing can replace a real dick). But nobody ever got what it takes to do it. Karen notices Kody's mom hasn't been with a man in a long time and used that fact to seduce her. Maybe Kody makes more decisions at home, it sounds like advice but it is so spot on his mom can't help but do it. With time Kody's behavior around her changes his mother. She can even witness Olivia with Kody and be jealous she isn't in her daughter's place.

Thank you for another beautifully written story.

Also just noticed that this guy got laid before he got his first kiss. But fun times all around, please give us more from this series.

Jasmine, fantastic, you'd laid back for a while good to hear from you. I think including mommy would be real good.

Continue on, please. tie it to some of your other stories.

I read all his stories and always hot to read all the time.

I really enjoy your stories, and I really enjoy your illustrator's works in those stories. Quite frankly, you are among the very few people who actually have really good images in the Illustrated category. I wish most if not all your stories were illustrated.

Another great story can't wait till you include the mothers in the story so that everyone can have fun. I still enjoy reading your older stories and still rate them and leave you comments enjoy reading them.

YES continue with the Mom joining in.

Peter

When I first saw this story I was going too skim it because it was (groan) 6 pages! But I started reading and got through the first page and the foot joy was in play! After my kink was treated with toe sucking and foot worship and the foot fuck, I was hooked! Read the whole story. Enjoyed it immensely. Had to rate it a 5 because I couldn't give it more! And the illustrations enhanced my pleasure as I perused its pages! Now in my mind I'm with you, Jasmine, and your feet and toes getting ready to taste the treat of your enticing feet! Aaahhh! Thanks!

Let’s follow Mom on her journey to depravity.

Get Mom to join in and maybe the other mother and father. Sounds good to me.

Hi Jasmine, long time fan. Thank you for another great story. What program do you use to do your artwork? I especially love your illustrated stories.

yes please continue this story

nurses are always hot

since you bring in soft d/s between the girls, a nurse you could bring in medical play, since could have access to equipment that is being discarded and set up her own exam/play room at home

and maybe she has been playing at work

soooo many possibilities for your creative mind

Please continue this story it can only get better.

I hope this becomes a multi part story with lots of family members!

Me, too! is in response to Legsfeettoes' comment. I was going to write all that, but he beat me to it!

I have one suggestion that's a little different from the others: Yes, definitely bring in Kody's and Olivia's mother, but have a tug of wills between her and Karen. Karen expects to be the dom, but Mom won't have any of that from a girl the age of her daughter. And nurses are accustomed to directing people to where, when, and what. But definitely incest between mom, son, and daughter, all at the same time...with Karen and Gemma cheer-leading?

Every time I log on to Literotica I check the Illustrated category. For months, it doesn't change until now. Another classic from SSL. Five stars and a favorite point. As to continuing this with the Mom, fuck yes! Just make it an Illustrated story rather than in the Incest category. Your illustrated stories are so fucking hot!!!

I am constantly checking to see what you’ve put out new!! Love all your stuff and can’t wait to see how this story progresses!!

this story was great! i love the characters and fun vibe throughout... i hope you make it a series!

I know that however you continue the story will be perfect.

Realism, and eroticism, would increase if an A or B cup appeared, if a dick got soft on occasion, if every combination & permutation didn't get done in the first encounter.

I always love your stories and hope to see mom become the fourth cock slut. Maybe include Gemma’s mom

I love all your story . i would love too see this story continus with several sequel

Fantastic as always. Please continue!!

A follow up with Karen and Olivia's mom would be great can't wait for you to write itd.

Have a great day

need chapter

mom joings in has tricks of her own

all 4 women get knocked up

That is every boys fantasy getting to fuck his sister and her friends. I never got past the fantasy stage and jacking off. I can't wait to read about their mother joining in the fun.

I really appreciate your very erotic stories along with excellent illustrations.

I have read all of your stories and I'm glad to see a longer story again. I really hope you're going to go further with these characters.

Would love to see a part 2 with the mom hell even a part 3 focusing on just the family

I loved the story and ending. Would love a long chapter 2 with Olivia and Kody's mom getting in on the action, sharing her fantasies and inviting Gemmas mom over as the Moms have been long time lovers too. Keep it fun without getting them knocked up, just my take.

I accidentally hit the 1 star. This was definitely a 5 star story.

maybe mom fantasizes about using a strap-on on olivia and karen persuades her to let kody fuck her also.

Superb, magnificent story ! Entertaining, hot and of course really addictive ....

Silkstockingslover at her best.

Thank you so much, Jasmine, and I'm patiently waiting for the Mommy Pet sequel.

That's a must, but take the necessary time to put all the good ingredients and care into it. Thanks already for that too.

Charlie B27.

I have been reading your stories for a few years now and this one is by far the hottest one yet. I’m eagerly awaiting the mommy pet one.

I for one would like to see the sequel. I’d anyone can write MILF submission it is you. Greetings from Chicago.

Yup, needs another part or two. Where Kody use his sis on a whim regularly, Karen works on getting all the parents in all the ways (and probably indeed getting tables turned by her dad, who doesn't pass on opportunity to take ready harem of three teens and two milfs), and Kody & Gemma romance is building despite of all the debauchery around.

I would like to know if the 2nd chapter is going to be written so I can read it . I would also like to read about how kodys mom gets pounded by her son while her daughter is eating g out her pussy. Sounds sex just thinking about it. Bye for now .

Thank you SSL, I am new to this site and am finding it so educational. Your story is by miles the best I’ve read so far, the story line had me intrigued right the way thru and the pictures were so sexy. Thank you, I will have to start reading more of your stories.

You want ideas? Well I’m not to experienced,(I’m only 20), but I have a vivid imagination. Perhaps MILF “mum” should seek advice from her local Minister, he may be able to guide her in the right direction? If the Minister has a daughter, she may also give guidance to the family. Could end up with them all being “baptised”.

This story is amazing, it usually takes me a long time to get off, but I climaxed 3 times in a half hour. Nicely written 😉

Loved this story and the improved illustrations added another level of excitement. Keep up the great work xx

Yes!!!!!!!! I want a Part 2!!!! Loved it!!!!!

I truly enjoyed your comments at the end of the story and why you shaped it as you did. A very nice peek into the way you think and thanks for allowing us to see that!.

Would love to see more

OH. WOW!! What a wonderful story. I just lpve your stories! Love to erad more,. Great pictures.

Fantastic artwork!!

Thanks for another fabulous story. I can't wait for your next.

enjoy it to the end , Real got me hard dripping cum only thing might have made it better was if they had used the strap on on his ass too so sister could watch him getting fuckd to

this is one of the best things I have ever read.

This was an awesome story. I don't know how to continue it but please do.

This story is similar in theme to many of this author's stories in that it focuses on two fetishes: 1. stockings and 2. dom/sub relationships. It doesn't matter in which category the story resides, these themes are ubiquitous, with the sex often taking a backseat.

The writing is above average with only minor issues (e.g. the use of prevaricate throughout is amusing, given the nature of the story). Unfortunately, both the nylon and the dom/sub theme feel extremely forced.

Sure, stockings can be sexy in the right setting, but for the most part, they are uncomfortably hot and get runs at the drop of a hat (and then they look like shit). I guess for nylon lovers, this must be nirvana. I think it's kind of sad that the author's characters can only have "explosive" sex wearing stockings.

The dom/sub theme in this story really stands out, and not in a good way. Every action and reaction is evaluated against this binary backdrop. To the point where I found it distracting and ultimately, detracting from the story. I think it's silly, simplistic and myopic to read about relationships in this context. In the end, it felt like the characters were disposable since they were incapable of any real emotion. They were just sex mannequins put in their positions. It's a shame that people and sex are thought of in this way.

Almost too long to read in one sitting...You do some great writing....

Maybe you said, but did you do the pics or did someone else??

You really are a nasty girl. Some domination and no ones body was left out. Its not often you draw men you have a talent for it, I did like his smooth balls

Please continue with mommy pet. Those story would be amazing, just like all your stories!!!

I love reading your work. The illustrations help my imagination and are so nicely done. Was hard through the entire story! Mission accomplished :-) Would Karen use a strap on with Kody?

I would really like to read a continuation of this story with the mother.

How many times do you get off before you complete a story? I've jerked off more than three times with this story.

Please please continue this story

is needed! OMG! what a joy to discover this story!!

Good stuff would like to see the incestuous threesome, and a continuation on maybe him and gemma or all of them into something closer maybe.

Yes please continue with mom joining in.Thank You Silk

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Wow, I loved this story and would love for you to continue the story with the mother getting involved with all of them, especially having Kody fucking his mother as she is eating his sister and Gemma is sitting on Olivia's face.

Holy. Shit. First of all, however you get/make your photos are amazing. They are hot as shit. Second, this story, though it has its predictable family matter moments, is hot as hell!!! Maybe I say it’s predicable because of certain personal fantasies as well. Either way this story was hot. I have my favorites, I think Karen is a bitch but don’t we all have that one “bitch” in our groups.

As far as writing a sequel.... my vote is HELL YESSS!! I would have rated this a 10 if there was enough stars.

Hoping to see more soon!!!!!!

Great story and pictures. Couldn't find the ten star grade. Love the whole thing and hope you continue the story with the mother (and maybe another nurse or two from her work) as well as the mother's of the other girls. Man what a lucky brother. Every boy's wet dream. The pictures worked perfect.

One of my all time favourites - loved the story, loved the pictures. More please!

really keep their knickers on all the time - as shown in some of the pictures?

Must have made it difficult to screw!!

You have one fantastic erotic imagination!! Three stories in and I'm in love ~ with your style, descriptive abilities and your knack for finding excellent illustrators!!! On to the next if your adventures! Thank you ;)

yes more of this story and yes get karen to train the mum and to get her son and daughter to do herthen have her as their slave with mum as bottom of the totem

Continuation idea: Karen to finds the mom masturbating, waits until she’s close to cumming and steps in, surprises her, strattles her face and taunts her to admit she wants to lick her daughter but with the other 3 at the door watching mom in a frenzied state admits “yes! I just want to lick and suck both my kids!” The story is the aftermath. We find out she saw the son with them and assumed the siblings were having sex before that because she saw Olivia watching Kody stroking his big cock and saw her treating him differently after that...

I hope you continue on to part two. I was totally mesmerized and aroused by your sequence of sexual events.

Having the Mom show up early from work is such a brilliant and erotically sensual touch.

Bud

I loved this, as well as other stories you have written, but this one is particularly very sexy and over the top - messed my hand it did - and the fact that the three girls have been getting it on for a while together, not that I have read any others with them but will be searching, makes it very hot and sexy. Can't wait for the next story in this theme and love the idea from others about really bringing the mum into the full spectrum of every type of fucking, including with her daughter and son. Now THAT makes it even hotter. Can't wait to see the pics as well. Too bad they aren't real ones but your artist is excellent in meeting any and all visual needs for all.

As someone said, one pic in this story is missing.

This story is extremely well written, as well as, a great story itself! The illustrations are well done and really add to make this an all around fantastic piece.

An amazing fantasy come to life! Would love to read about Karen's adventures in Europe too...

I would like to see Karen invite Olivia, Kody and Gemma over for a pool party. Olivia and Kody's mom also is invited by Karen but is made to wear a thong bikini as part of her training as Karen's milf pet . Kody and Gemma are now in a sex filled boyfriend/girlfriend relationship.

Hardest part to believe was that both Gemma and Kody got into Harvard! Fantastic fantasy - although I'd think that given Karen's dominance, she had to at least *think* about sliding her strap-on up Kody's virgin ass.