All Comments on 'Family Reunion'

build-up or character development. Minimalism is okay when it works right. However, this doesn't. Plus, you failed to add quotation marks around the dialogue. Was this by design or an oversight?

Please consider enlisting the assistance of an editor/proofreader or you will be relegated to the realm of three star scores for the duration of your writing career. ***

You could have added more details and make it longer with vivid imagination how things develop.

yee-haw!