by Scorpius1945
Your story had me hoping for a way for them to end up together.
Now that was a great story,i hope u write more like that,damn i love a happy ending
Hot erotic and lots of fun. Really great detail I enjoyed it very much
Keep writing fantastic from beginning to end
What a weird story. It seemed like the characters barely knew each other. There was very little emotional connection. The story lost me when she fantasized about deballing him.