All Comments on 'Family Reunion Surprise Pt. 02'

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Anonymousover 9 years ago

left hanging AGAIN

so once again we get left hanging by a writer that doesn't know enough to write the whole story out in rough draft BEFORE editing and posting ANYTHING. if writers would do this the readers wouldn't get left hanging when the writer gets a brain fart.

IF you are smart you will continue this ASAP and it would be nice if he and carol stay together.

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My stories are written with real people in mind. I embellish or fantasize to get the big “What If ?” Sometime I combine several different experiences from various people into one story. If a story sounds too real, I take that as a compliment. Only a fool would write a nonfic...

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