All Comments on 'Family Searched at Airport Ch.4'

I waited months you will continue

Thank you

Looks like there is more to come. Hope we don't have to wait as long for the next chapter...

hope you continue. maybe mother and daughter miss flight and get seduced and have sex

My favorite story

Please continue

Can't wait to see what the father and husband saw after his wife and daughter appeared from the curtains.

Hopefully they were made to dress like sluts so people can take advantage of them and they get used non-consensually in perverted ways.

You have a great imaginationa and looking forward to the next part.

One of my favourite stories on here by far.

Would be great if the females were wearing sexy undies too like black stockings and high heels.

Please dont make us wait this long for the next chapter =)

Getting withdrawal symptoms. Need another dose of your story.

It's been months! I'm guessing there won't be any more updates?

Where is the next part?! I am still waiting on the conclusion please finish the story.

I'd really like to have seen the men in the family to also receive similar humiliation and undergo a similar search. There was a seriously hot homoerotic story set in the future titled "Step This Way" by seriouslyspanked on the GayDemon website that could be something of a model. "Now would you please point the head of your penis towards me and retract your foreskin all the way back."

I think he must have snuffed it it's been too long.

You could include a couple of police women who try to Interfere and get arrested and strip searched in front of the crowd.

Great story, but you can't stop there!

More! Soon please?

That was great, but you can't stop there! We need more.

great story. might be nice to have the mom missing the eroticism after she got back home and have the son help her relive it. maybe the dad could do the same with the daughter. lots of options to explore. keep these stories coming!

You can't leave us like that!

In my opinion, the story wasn't over-long or took too much time to reach the "action". The writer built up the suspense and anticipation very well, and I think that that element is far more erotic and arousing than the finale. I think that there was room for some more extreme sexual motifs. It doesn't have to be completely plausible. This is a work of fiction after all.

There are quite a few spelling mistakes and grammar issues. I advise the author to read through the piece a couple of times before submitting.

As far as the ending is concerned, I think it's meant to be left open so that the reader can decide for himself what happened next.

Continue the story please. 5*

Great writing with a consistent story line. I enjoyed you building the family’s characters slowly as everything began to unfold. Excellent details and extremely descriptive so we could visualize the events as they happened. That being stated, you seem to be finished with this family but I think we both know there is much more to share. I have not written in quite a long while but reading these chapters has my fingers anxious to assault my keyboard. Would you mind if I wrote chapters 5 - 8? I’ll follow your story line being it’s your work. I feel this is a brilliant start for a great story. Would you mind if I picked up here?

I hope to read a response here but I will attempt contacting you via email as well.

Respectfully,

Mike Furdell

Echoing the sentiment for continuing the story. You created a real gem with lots of room to go forward. The idea of the police women getting involved sounds very interesting. Maybe make them air marshals on the long flight. Or whatever you come up with.

Hopefully you'll return for more. Either way thanks for a great story.

I see "7 years ago" and now I'm having a heart attack

This story got me, and I want more

What will happen next?

What's the resolution/ending to all of this?

Are you alive?

@illk95588 please continue the story, doesn’t seem like @buddybot111 will

TOO BAD

That Buddybot111 has not finished the story. It's been about 8 years since this story was posted. Even tho I enjoyed the story had I known it was unfinished I would not have read it.

Please finish your story. Thank you.

Would love to see the finished story for this.

"Article two, white cotton pants belonging to female Emily Muren...-

At the start of the story her pants were DARK SILVER!