All Comments on 'Family Secrets'

Great story, very well done. A couple of typos but nothing to distract you. Can't wait to read chapter 2.

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Would have been 5* if Alex was in the last party!

Great story!!! Your writing is really solid and makes the story come to life. Thanks!!

would have liked a little more back story to describe shat lead the couples to stray from their marriage vows, but the action and dialogue was great.

Gave it 5*,, thanks for not having that hair brained slut Alex in the group

Too me , Alex is just A freaking child that never got enough spankings as she was growing up

I don't give 5s very often. Only to storys that are HOT!! Your discription of the action, including the times some one is watching the others, is outstanding, Vivid!!

The potential for more of these couples is open. Also potential for more fucking that little cunt Alex. I know Daddy wants more, & uncl John needs to lay some pipe with her. I really liked the 3some scene! Now that one was super HOT!!!

Thank You for enertaining me with this story. Going to check out your other works.

I liked the fact everyone came clean about cheating on their spouses and the two couples coming together. Yes, I think Alex could have been in the last scene even though I don't like the way she manipulates and blackmails her sex partners. 5 stars anyway, wouldn't mind seeing more chapters. Thanks for a great read.

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And wouldn't be opposed to a followup.

Thanks

I'm sorry, but you lost me after the second sentence.

Good story with excellent pacing. I would like to see you write more about this family, maybe at a Family get together or even Family Reunion.

this a hot story we need more keeepon stroking tenbears43

A couple of times you mixed up the names of either Debbie and Alex, or Debbie and Amy. For example, on the last computer page, when they were confessing to each other what they had done with each other: "... but Bill and Amy were not disinclined to tell the story about their threesome." I had to go back and reread this and make the correction in my head as it should have read: "... but Bill and Debbie were not disinclined..." A mix up also occurred when Alex was with John the day that John had sex with both Debbie and Alex (at different times). That can (and did) distract and interrupt the flow of a good story. Take a little more time to proofread.

If you don't give a story past the second sentence you aren't really giving it a chance at all. Great story and perfect pacing. The mix ups with the name didn't distract from the story line at all for me, but I can see where it may for some people. Either way, keep up the good work!

Great story, well told... the mistakes were minor... I never got beyond day dreaming of something like this but those day dreams were hot.....

Please continue this story.... I can see all kinds of possibilities for it.....

You did a nice job of slowly bringing everyone in.

Thoroughly enjoyable storyline. Thank you.

Great story with superlative segue. Now on to to next chapter were they get Alex involved . . . .