by mandarb
Wow! This story is amazing! One of the best I've read. Got hot just after the discription of the characters. More!!
If you do not carry on with this you would be daft,its red hot ,very erotic and has loads of potential.
Wow, what a great start. Please do a couple of more chapters. It was HOT
Bi-incest is my favourite topic. Just the start of a big one, I hope. I can even overlook the occasional spelling error.