by tantrik721
you taking a handgun .. placing the barrel in you mouth and killing your self
This story is moving in the right direction. Hope you will post the next chapter soon.
And do it soon, please. India won't miss you; they have plenty of people. And for all you nimrods out there who enjoy this shit, shoot yourselves, too. the world ios fucked up enough without you.
Jesus man you're one sick fucking asshole too then. gave it a 51!!!!
Not an original thought or sentence in this mess.Not to poorly written but........these Indian stories are ALL the same. BTW humiliating the dumbfuck husband is not erotic
The story is going as per Indian Traditions so dont evaluate with western mind set
I like the drama in the story as well the subplots that are going on. Hope there's more. This reminds me of Jaycuck's stories.
awesome...rated 5 stars...a big fan of your outstanding stories...what a flair for writing exceptioanlly good erotica...just one suggestion,please make kavita wear lowest possible sarees with nearly skimpy blouses,with lots of ornaments,if possible piercings,and tottering high heels...right in front of her teenage daughters....let the daughters see and feel the change in their mum,let ravi be more pained seeing her beautiful wife slowly slipping away...please make kavita a slut and if narang brings a friend or two back home one day,all the merrier....just make kavita wear ultra low sarees and smallest of blouses in front of everybody...thanks.
continue your awesome work bro
Eagerly waiting for next chapter, hope you make this long story
Husband and Wife relationship dynamics makes this very hot. Having other family members makes it even more hot
Keep it up...
I have enjoyed the build up in your story. Does it finish here? Would be disappointed to discover the wife leaves the husband. It is one of biggest underlying dangers or cuckolding, the wife choosing the new man.
I would also hope you don't develop a sexual relationship involving the daughter. Have to admit though can't see how or why this was included in the story. As a reader I literally chose to skip the portions with daughter and boyfriend.
My kinks, fantasies and experiences lead me to enjoy and find satisfaction in a loving cuckold story.......The wife can control, use and even humiliate her husband in many ways, but destroying their relationship undermines it. My life can support the cuckolding, but not the lose of love.....
Well have like the story but hopefully Ravi man's up some.. just because someone enjoys their wife's sexual pleasure being satisfied doesn't mean he has to be a pussy.. so hoping for Ravi to take back what is his and put the other guy in his place..
Your writing ability superb.plz writing 4 part as soon as possible and develop neha and Ravi sexul story
when will my wife finally act like this?????//
from a shy wife i have converted her to dress sexy, act like a bitch in bed---now i wan her to fuck another man in front of me-ohh when will that day come??/
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What a wonderful detail of Kavita body described you.please write more & more.and ignore nagtiv comments.you ara best storyteller.hattesoff.
Fastasies should remain fastasies for a reason. You would think that you are in control but you loose yourself in the time being. Thanks for opening my eyes.
all i say is story is realistic and writing skills amazing, more dialogues, discussion between couple and bull seems realistic. great job