All Comments on 'Fantasy Fulfilled Ch. 07'

You have left the series at a very nice note.

@Impo61

A faithful reader of your stories and the first to comment on every story you write. LOL

Keep writing Tantrik your stories are good.

You are very wrong @BJayCool...As soon as I begin to read and see is an Indian story, I go to the end and post always the same commentand rate it 1*...You should be more observant before you post a comment about anyone...This is a 7 part story and I didn't read more than the first setences of part 1...I'm always the first to comment, because I don't read them...And it seems that isn't your case...

Yes you are right, i read the story and then comment

not some mindless, pointless comments and scores.

@BJayCool...You are free to read and comment, as I'm free to skip the reading and comment and rate these Indian stories...Your freedom doesn't colide with mine...That's what I like in LW's site...Freedom!!! There are sites when you rate a story low or make a bad comment, you are banned from there...I could give you an example of such a website...

Just couldnt see it as real. If real just hopelessness

are below your shoulders.

....not a story that could be taken even slightly seriously in any venue.

First, if you are writing for an English-speaking audience, you need to get your lingual cues correct. If you are writing to be annoying, well.....I'd say you've succeeded. Strange, impossible twists and entirely uncharacteristic behaviors, no thought or consideration for public effect or response to blatant public behavior...not even good fantasy. Too bad. It might have been a worthwhile story had you gotten the grammar, sentence structure and spelling reasonably correct. But, alas, you did not. Beyond that, the story itself was just too far fetched to be believable in the most modest of degrees.

Try something else for awhile. This was just saddening.

Reading the comments I am appalled to find that all the literary pundits are here on literotica. Majority of the readers don't care a fiddler's fart about grammatical perfection you idiots. If the story is about Indians, then it should read like it and not as if its written by a British cock working at Oxford.

Why are you finished this wonderful story?

Very nice story

As to the self-appointed Language Puritans, they display a lack of tolerance when a Desi writer submits a story.

A DESI WRITER MUST CONVEY HIS OR HER FANTASIES THE WAY THEY GUSH OUT OF HIS OR HER IMAGINATION. THAT WAY THE FANTASIES ARE MORE REAL & MORE CONVINCING.

Many Indian women are very sexy. Ask yourself whether the Creator gave them that sex appeal for a reason. Is her karma to make more then one man happy.

Are very sexy Western wives more faithful than their Indian counterparts?

It's been a long time. When r u coming up with a new one?

In your new story Neha should be the main character.

Please write some more .. soon

ravi neha... neha murty... much more

Please continue this story.. Great work.. Continue this series. Please

Please continue this series. Eagerly waiting...

Pet Neha and kavita have a fuck feast while priya can join them too soon

Do u write these cuck stories before or after u have licked the cum of your wife’s lovers from her holes?

....Or do u write these after your wife and daughter have both pegged your ass while u suck and prepare their lovers cock for fucking them? ? Which is it tanty?

I am a fan of this story series. Do come up with one more chapter :)

This series should continue with murty with kavita n neha

add priya too with Neha and kavita make them public slut

Rated every story in this series 5 stars. Please don't stop it now, do continue with more parts, but please get rid of the Narang character, abuse is a big NO NO.

Rated every story a *1. I agree with me Indian cousin Tantprick about this author.

despite you being a female..from your stories i can deduce that you are

1. a manly looking female who has never been able to attract men..leading you to withdraw inwards

2. your inability to be a female in the normal sense of the term has forced you to eroticise and fantasize yourself as a woman who has control of her sex life

saad... mostlikly u come from a broken family where u did not have any good male role models... i pray for you ...

These stories are excellent and the series should be continued

Well somehow it became lengthy.you should complete it in this series

such junk & boring stories.

Boring 😴👎👎👎

Please continue the series again

Each chapter made me so hard that i ended up masturbating.. can author please continue this series..?

I need someone to suggest me the same kind of stories please...

The Indian stories which are continuously narrated and involve mother and her daughter