All Comments on 'Fantasy Harem Ch. 02'

Is English even your language. Get someone to proof read your work and I don't mean yourself. You are supposed to capitalize peoples names every time. Oh and a person wears clothes not close. If this is your normal writing you need to seriously sit down and think about how your doing things because you took a story and destroyed it.

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It's a good concept and the writing is better than a lot of others I have read. Maybe could use some proof reading but please keep writing