All Comments on 'Fantasy Night'

very well done. keep writing.

Lol. i am a huge fan of Kresley Cole. This was a good story, but it doesn't hold a candle next to Kresley's works

Great story. I think you could turn this into a serious fic, with a little fleshing out of characters and environment. Really good stuff!

I enjoyed Ruby's adventure. I like that she was her own person, and was not afraid of the supernatural beings coming on to her. Very hot, cant wait for more.

don't forget to check out my blogs for stories not yet edited enough to post here. there is a lot more to come.

short and smutty

http://latenightscribbler.blogspot.com/

Story log

http://eroticscribe.blogspot.com/2013/11/sabrinas-new-world-ch-one.html

Give us more, more, more please. This was really good.

Freakin loved it! More...soon please :)