All Comments on 'Fantasy Palace Ch. 05'

by beaverhunter76

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
wow

we need more!!!!

DreamsRSweeterDreamsRSweeterabout 16 years ago
inconsistancies

Good story, but there are some inconsistencies. You use odd names sometimes, and mix up heights etc. Otherwise really good. Proofread a bit more and this would be super!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
hottest story here!!

its the mixture of articulate writing and tabu sex (anal) thats so special.

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