All Comments on 'Fantasy Reversal Ch. 08'

i just love this story, cant wait to see what cums next.

kisses

bobbie

Will there be another chapter?

its A duplicate of ch 7.

please post part 8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You've prepared a great and interesting series for 6 chapters but chapter 7 should have been this chapter as most of it is the same, a sad letdown! Chapter 8 should have taken your readers to a more detailed sharing of Sam's last night as Trina and a better detailed explanation of the next morning. It seems you just dropped us without any real definitive plot conclusions. Did they change back or did he get to stay as Trina and Trina as Sam? Overall I loved your story except as noted above. It's been a few years but I think a Chapter 9 Epilogue would be a good read if you are still writing on this site.

Shame there is not a final chapter or two! As it would be a better read if you got a proofreader in first check the story as throughout words have been accepted by the spell checker eg to instead of two. Also as most chapters are only a page long, make them pages & have the story in one place, in it's entirety. I would like to know if Sam/Katrina spends more time time as Katrina as perhaps their 'honeymoon' had left her pregnant as she did not take any precautions. Or just for sheer enjoyment.

My first time reading your stories. I love the idea but not a fan your writing and you really should get your efforts proofread.

I think I just might try to write stories with your premise. Anna