All Comments on 'Fast Food Boss Fuck Ch. 01'

this is not incest

"....the site of a well toned woman in a bikini..." is where she sits. The SIGHT of a well toned woman can be pleasing.

In any case, I thought it was decent. I'd spend a little more time on build up, and be a little more descriptive with the sex. The whole thing seemed a little short.

Isn't it a taboo to seduce/urge an underling into sexual activities?

Remember Bill Clinton?

As a debut story, I would have preferred to see a complete story rather than the first instalment of a longer piece of work. The author has succeeded in leaving me intrigued as to where this plot is leading. Is it heading towards incest or taboo? I will reserve my judgement until the next instalment. I will give the author the benefit of any doubts I have.

I liked it very much!

i didn't see anything in this story that would be considered taboo or a incest type of story, real or not. not bad though.

Predictable and short. Common fantasy, and text was not without errors. Your character will be more affable if you limit the words cunt and cocksucker

Rating:

Story: ☆☆☆☆+ (4.4/5.0 = 88%)

Pam: ☆☆☆☆☆ (5)