by HotGrrrl69
YOUR RIGHT IT IS TOOOOOO SHORT BUT A GREAT STORY ALL FOUR CHAPYERS GOT PERFECT MARKS 5 STARS PLUS LOVE IT AND LOVE THE ENDING SO FAR. I LOVE IT BETTER BECAUSE THERE WAS LOVE NOT ABUSE LIKE THERE IS IN SOME OF THE PASSED STORYS I'VE READ ,GREAT JOB AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK...............................................R..................................
Normally... I look for long detailed stories that have some teasing build up... However, I sometimes get bored when the auther drags it out for too long before anything happens. Your stories are fun. I love them... I would love to see you write more.
Have enjoyed reading this so far but where's the final chapter?