All Comments on 'Father, Will you Sculpt Me?'

by regularguy13

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Creative concept

...but I don't think it is your best work

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Title lured me in.

I'm not a fan of flashbacks ... at all ... but I stuck with it. I was a little disappointed in the lack of detail in the father/daughter scene. Considering this is listed in the Incest/Taboo category, I expected more. It seemed rushed.

uSolitary1964uSolitary1964over 8 years ago
Good

Amazing, write more, good but too short...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
thinking of the beach

wow when she made him orgasm with a hand job on page three -- very vivid description. you captured just how it goes sometimes

blackknight314blackknight314over 7 years ago
oh well...

I was,disappointed in this chapter, and thought you could have done more. Only 1 mans opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
sequel

I can see her telling her sister about this, and what Abby does about it. Daddy won't have to do without sex anymore.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
bloody beautiful

*****!

cheeers

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Trailer park white trash

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Utter gibberish. Jumping around all over the place. I got vertigo

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