All Comments on 'Father's Rules'

Are you available the other six days? :+)))

I'm glad I found this. I hope you continue their Sunday lesson.

It somehow doesn't seem right, unless it is in the form of a letter or message for stories like this, and then it has to be in past tense saying what we did, or future tense saying what I hope we will do, but not present tense.

Otherwise, second person is for instruction manuals and cookbooks.

Khorybannefin, I note that one of your other stories is also second person narration and somebody else commented on that. Despite my preference for first or third person, I thought the writing and construction of the story was really good and the imagery quite erotic. The naughtiness of defiling the man of the cloth shone through the story.

Lue

in·cest

ˈinˌsest/Submit

noun

sexual relations between people classed as being too closely related to marry each other.

the crime of having sexual intercourse with a parent, child, sibling, or grandchild.

True, the story is not about an incestuous relationship. But the category is Incest/Taboo, and I do suspect that it is just a little bit taboo for a priest to have a sexual relationship with a parishioner. Whatever happened to celibacy in the priesthood?

Lue

I'm new to writing original works. My forte is reader insert fan fiction, which is all done in second person. I tend to do it automatically. I'm learning to do it in other ways. I didn't realize it threw people off so much to read it in second person. I will try harder to adjust in future.

And yes, I put the story here because it was TABOO with the priest kink in it. I thought it fit best here.

so hot.... so mant places this could be taken if left to the imagination....

Kingcuddle, i might available the other 6 days... lol

Wow. Incredibly hot. I mean this is great because I usually don't like STRAIGHT stuff like this (I'm mostly into gay stuff even though I'm straight and I'm a guy. [funny, it's usually some girls you'd expect liking anything that's gay]) but this was pretty hot. I thought it was gay father x son 😂 but I guess not. Great job

Is... Is this a fanfic of castiel and gender swapped dean in like a priest AU?

Lmfaooo the fact that my name is andrea too 😂😂😂