All Comments on 'Faux Realm Ch. 01'

Being a gamer and sci-fi fan this excited me and will wait for more.

Very nice start to a story. I hope it continues.

Did you think of using Patreon? Your stories are amazing. I would support you and you really need the exposure. Hope you read this comment. After what happened with your comments on your previous stories and death threats I am amazed that you stuck to writing.

Keep working on them.

cant wait to read chapter 2... amazing writing skills.

the story itself is intriguing but you are in dire need of an editor. It's pretty hard to read.

Is your first language French?

Enjoying this .... got to get to chapter 2