All Comments on 'Favor for a Friend Ch. 03'

by Jenna Grey

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thickandjuicythickandjuicyover 19 years ago
nooooooooooo its not finished

that was great .... but its not done...it cant be done ....too many unanswered questions ....are they a couple ....are they just fuck buddies ...sigh u must write one more i need more

skywriterxxxskywriterxxxover 19 years ago
Wow, this story is...

simply incredible!! Now I see what you've been up to!

Have a great day, take care, my friend!

~Sky~

Paul069Paul069over 19 years ago
A very sexy love story

This is wonderful Jenna, I really liked it a lot. A very fine balance of love and romance, something some authors here forget exist together. Your imagination is only surpassed by your writing talent. Keep up this wonder work. Peace and a distant smile.

SappholoversSappholoversover 19 years ago
Still simmering down

I enjoyed the interplay, the give-and-take, the doubting and needing inside the mind of this woman as she found herself re-engaging (and almost dis-engaging again) with this friend. The story built, as the trajectory of erotica almost demands, to a predictably passionate conclusion...but the last few paragraphs took us under the skin of the woman in a refreshing, beautiful way. Just as in the best lovemaking, my favorite part of the story came in the afterplay, after the sex subsided: It was the paragraph that began, "Still simmering...."

limaxraylimaxrayover 19 years ago
AGREAT LOVE STORY

You are one of the best writers. This story makes me want to read more of your stories. Are there more????? ED

ImagetakerImagetakeralmost 19 years ago
Brava!

The third and final segment was exquisite. Very well done, Jenna. This is certainly a favor, to us, your readers. You certainly did not disappoint.

Now where is my box of tissues?

James

AgenaAgenaover 18 years ago
Its all been said

Previuos comments speak for me too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
pussy dripping wet

I felt the chills go down my spine and my pussy get wet, now I'm going to go fuck my pussy with my dildo, I'm so horny, very well written

RossDanielsRossDanielsabout 13 years ago
Well done!

Sweet, sexy and very well written. The erotic passages are excellent . . . and very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

More more more.. Damn that was so hot

h0llel0ttahairh0llel0ttahair7 months ago

Love story? No thanks.

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