All Comments on 'Fay's Dirty Discoveries Ch. 03'

by toocold

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
More! More! More!

The way you trickle out Fay's perversions is so tantalizing. I can't wait to find out what happens next! The little details, e.g. the smells and the blushing, are good. It's well written. Maybe I'm a little disappointed that Nadia is a prostitute - it's sort of ruined the good-girl-gone-bad aspect of the story. (I would have preferred it if Fay had got Nadia drunk and then done stuff to her.) That said, a prequel summarising Nadia's adventures in a bridging chapter would be awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story but lesbianism is more that a fetish

Please stop listing it as just another perverse fetish. It's a legitimate orientation.

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