All Comments on 'February Fever'

You so busy watching you forgot the story.

well written but the story that we want to read is the one where the wife was confronted about her cheating and the problem or her cheating was fixed.... devorice? forgiveness or what

I suppose its your opinion - but always better to forget the story than to forget your manners in my opinion. Not to mention your grammar.

The comment below was directed at Anonomous - aren't they always?

We want to know what happens next! Throw the cheating slut, whore out!

I hope you make a sequel more interesting. Consenting or whimpy husbands who become voyeurs have no depth of character not enteresting downright boing. Such a character just leaves the story flat. Kind of destroys the grit and spice in the story.

Jim

he should have broke the window in and beat the shit out of the guy.... i hate stories where the hubby dont do anything where is the vengegence ... where is the natural order...99 percent of men would try to kill either one or both of them .... i would make sure the guy knew he had fucked up ... even if it was only to be displaying bruises at work for a few days.... maybe tell his wife if hewasman enough to have one... let him try to explain how he got his car fucked up and his face also... her i would just make her look at the mirror for thee next few days wondering when the swelling would go down....and the night out with the girls would never happen again ... she wouldnt go anywhere without me not even to church if she even went to a place like that

id fuck them both as much as possible ...she would have to apoligize every day for the rest of her natural life for me to even think about forgiving her fucking bitch

anti-wimp comments.

BUT, my friends, the writing is on the wall already. I fear we are in for the standard literotice wimp watching husband story where he will happily suck her lovers jism from her swollen pussy. Shame these stories are so fucking boringly predictable.

'twould be nice to be wrong.

on these stories. How about in the next part, the husband is not turned on, he does not approve of his wife's screwing around and he does get some revenge on the other man. Now that would be a change of pace for this type of story.

Or, you could use the same cookie-cutter ending that hundreds of other authors with little to no imagination use. He's a wimp, she is a slut, etc..

When will they get it. That's NOT erotic!

How in the )#@(*$ does "Loving wives" constitute a bitch that cheats on her husband. (With or without his permission)...yea that's "loving" alright. Get a life people.

Wow - what a lot of venom over a story! I find it quite amazing, because at the end of the day, that's all it is - a story. As to what constitutes eroticism and what doesn't - I think the various headings on Literotica go some way to answering that. I personally don't find BDSM or Incest stories erotic, but obviously there are a huge numer of people who do. I don't leave comments on every such story, I just don't read them. With regard to placing the story in the Loving Wives section, that was a choice I had to make - should it have been in Exhibitionism and Voyeur? I chose Loving Wives because I think the essence of the story is the husband's disbelief that his "loving wife" would deceive him and his dilemma as to either see how far she will go or to (as one guy so eloquently put it) "beat the shit out of him" - a solution which hardly makes for an erotic ending. I chose to end the story the way I did in order to leave something to the imagination of the reader - but alas, there seems to be an inability to distinguish between imagination and reality.

Get a life? I couldn't agree more!

this is just another slut/wimp story. I scored it a 00 for lack of content and originality.

Well Sportie, indeed it's just a story, albeit a somewhat sick one. However, you are 2 for 2 in this cuckolding vein. Judging by most of the comments and your responses, you can see this kind of marital disrespect for each other has not struck every one's erotic sense. This because it's way beyond sensual or entertainment - it's depraved but supported by the sickies. Are you to be the new sickie author?? How are the scores so far???

Whereas, swinging can have a balance or fairness - a respect about it as you well know. Watching your loving wife get non-consentually fucked / gangbanged with her husband watching and enjoying it, isn't sensual or erotic, it's weirdly sick to normal people. It's uncomfortable - not entertaining except to a sick mind. Life is art and a well written story can generate emotions - both good and / or bad one's as you have seen.

Writing in the Loving Wives Catagory is difficult for any author but particularly for new authors. You see most readers are experts in that vein and many of us have been through divorces. I hope you don't have to suffer through one to understand why life is full of reality and normally has consequence. Often times very painful consequence - emotional and / or physical one's. You write in the face of reality and it isn't pretty to most - not erotic - just sick!!

So, you certainly have the right to write what you want and place it where you want. We likewise have the right to comment and score each effort as we see fit in response to the emotions you cause us to feel. Basic eh.

Because you display some talent, we selfishly hope you will choose to entertain us in a edgy sensual manner with consequence if lifes normal expectation (reality) begs it. Your choice - please consider - Regards

Thanks Anon for your thoughtful comments - a welcome change. Of couse I respect the right of everyone to leave their comments and indeed welcome ones such as yours, otherwise I would have disabled the public comments button.

Is this really about cuckolding? in the strict dictionary definition, certainly - a cuckold is a man whose wife committed adultery. In modern parlance it has come to mean something else - neatly summarised at this site

http://adultcommunitiesonline.com/ourhotwives/cuckoldguide/#1

With regard to what is sick and/or erotic - well, just take a look at the subject headings. With the possible exception of First Time, would not some people consider all the subjects sick? I think that is the very nature of eroticism - one man's meat, another man's poison and all that.

My purpose of the story was really to try and explore the paradox of a man confronted with his wife's infidelity. Should he intervene and spend his life wondering if she would have taken her liason to its ultimate conclusion, or watch and find out if she really is not the "loving wife" he believed her to be. Sick? Possibly, but I wonder how many men are not intrigued by their wives/girlfriends desires and responses to those desires? How many have not inquired about their fantasies and/or past experiences? It is a grey area - as is the boundary between such activities and swinging - part of the erotic thrill of which must be driving enjoyment from seeing your partner being pleasured by/pleasuring another person.

Just my thoughts for what they are worth. Perhaps the site owners should open another category for me - Sickie Authors - but I suspect that by conventional social mores, we would all end up having to post there

Story is great. Don't worry about the idiots leaving comments that they don't like this kind of story. Stupid morons should read what they like and not waste their time.

It's what makes the world go 'round

It's what makes the world go 'round

We don't get to read about bouncing her ass down the sidewalk and kicking the guys ass??

You've left out the best part.

A very poor ending.

Yeah, I know, the writer only wants us salivating while we wait for his next installment. But (and this is a BIG but) the story so far is just a "ho-hum" of a husband spying on his cheating wife. Nothing new, nothing exciting so far...then he leaves it hanging. Maybe he thinks that's nice. It really isn't.

Well, if he wants to leave us "hanging out there", he should have put some tantalizing bits of drama in the ending. "Ho-Hum"....

A very poor ending.

Yeah, I know, the writer only wants us salivating while we wait for his next installment. But (and this is a BIG but) the story so far is just a "ho-hum" of a husband spying on his cheating wife. Nothing new, nothing exciting so far...then he leaves it hanging. Maybe he thinks that's nice. It really isn't.

Well, if he wants to leave us "hanging out there", he should have put some tantalizing bits of drama in the ending. "Ho-Hum"....

A very poor ending.

Yeah, I know, the writer only wants us salivating while we wait for his next installment. But (and this is a BIG but) the story so far is just a "ho-hum" of a husband spying on his cheating wife. Nothing new, nothing exciting so far...then he leaves it hanging. Maybe he thinks that's nice. It really isn't.

Well, if he wants to leave us "hanging out there", he should have put some tantalizing bits of drama in the ending. "Ho-Hum"....

SOME LIKE WRITING ONE WAY AND SOME DON'T LIKE SISSY MEN STORIES.THEY HAVE A RIGHT TO SAY WHAT THEY LIKE OR DISLIKE.TELL US HOW HE TOOK CONTROL AND WAS A MAN.

It sure would be nice if normal people would write more stories.

"That night at home, I was unable to contain my feelings and confronted my wife about her liaison, but that is another story."

We definitely have different notions of story. I thought it had to be the same story.

Learning from this story, I only read the last paragraph of your other story. That paragraph was a complete story almost to me--definitely more complete than this one.

Different ideas of story? I await your first submission with a great deal of anticipation.

I still find it amazing the number of anonomous comments that are posted - come on you guys - don't you have the courage of your own convictions. Stand up and be counted - along with the rest of us "wimps" and "limp dicks". I think your anonimity says more about you than my stories ever do about me.

good story, well written, kept me wanting more, and I do hope you finish the story.

Don't worry about the naysayers, they don't like anything good or bad.

About unfaithful wives would turn down a married female if one were desparate enough to offer herself to them????

the husband should have busted the windshield out and used the bat on both of them

Pat

Atlanta,Ga.

Wimpy husband, wimpy ending.

you either love or don't love these socalled "wimp" or "cuckold" stories. I don't, and those who don't have the right to expess their opinion as much as those wo like them.

So Sporting Spectator, are you going to write a sequel or not with the husband taking revenge or just accepting the situation. I would go for revenge and then kick her out. In all honesty, we all know that temptation is an ugly dragon and I suspect we all have been tempted in one way or the other, but if either husband or wife deliberately go out to cheat, their relationship is as good as dead. What comes next ? Another temptation/affair, and then another cause it was so "good" or "thrilling". And what about "getting even". At least be honest with yourself and with your partner and wrap up the marriage or present relationship before moving on to the next. So, no I don't like it and would like to see right been done. He also could and should have stopped it in my mind, unless you want evidence for the next step which can oly be "the end". But is been so long already since this story was posted that it is unlikely to expect a follow-up. G.Belgium.

Make a zero in to a 100

he sits and does nothing???? kick her out and ket the words, its you i love, only sex be stated to deaf ears

Kick that whore from here right to the Hell and get a five from me. In fact, who did look for the children when she went on her own and filled her unfaitfull pussy?

What a nasty slut. Love it.

...you should have finished the story. She had been cheating for awhile and didn't have any problem with it. For Gods' sake man, make her pack, leave, change the locks and move on. Any woman who would pull this nonsense so calmly has no respect for herself, her husband, her children or her marriage in general...so, that's another story...no, it's 4-5 more paragraphs. Come back to lefe and finish this tripe!

Obviously a queer that jacks off seeing men's dicks.

she failed a survey

she failed a survey

And now you do not write anymore!!!!

She has had her game taken to a higher level. Sorry, Hubby! You were a nice guy and a decent sexual partner! Just what few girls really want!

4*

You really are right on top of things. You comment on a story that is almost 8 years old. Bravo.

Nothing worst than a man that stays quiet while his wife cheats...That's a man without self-respect...

or just fucking stop writing!! It's not fair to the reader or this site to keep us hanging like that

She told you she would stay home from now on, if you would invite some neighbors over to screw her a couple of nights a week and stay with her and keep paying the bills, Right?

That’s it.? Finish a story or don’t bother writing.

You are mistaken. The confrontation was the whole story, which you declined to write. What you wrote was not a story. At most it was a stroke vignette, not particularly erotic, but not a story. In LW, in my opinion, it is all about the confrontation. Without that, boredom, ennui, tedium...

Just when it was getting good, you let it die for good.

stupid wimp of a husband deserves whatever she does to him sissy

If he gt within 15 yds of them, he could have ended them with a shotgun and buckshot, or crossbow. Being way out in the country,nobody would be the wiser. They both would deserve what they got, her being a slut mother and him banging a married woman.

Rubbish

Excitement at his wife cheating, most of it boring sex and no ending. If all lit stories was like that it would close down in a week

1 star - no comment for an unfinished story

Sorry you tried to disguise a worthless cuck story and it didnt work spanky.

You did a major epic fail.

We know how that confrontation went, "Honey I want you to bring him here next time so I can watch his alpha male cock make you cum like my worthless tiny cock can never do, I love you pookie bear".

Damn

Fucking cock-sucking wimp author. Didn't finish the tale huh? Damn again.

Hopeless - clearly a cuckold story and not a loving wife story - these types of tories should come with warnings so we can just avoid them

She is a slut. Divorce her. End of story.

Just when I was expecting the MC to man up and start breaking everyone of the BMW’s windows with a tire iron, he wusses out and starts jacking off. Real men get no erections when one of the fuckers is his own wife! Thought this story was well on its way to a “5” but as it stands, only a “1” for this effort.

... I checked her phone again and the message had been deleted. This eliminated my one doubt – that the message had been sent to her phone by mistake.

Utter nonsense. If the message had been sent by mistake - she still would have deleted it! So much for his one doubt.

Whoremaster's car should have had a horrific accident, where slut bit his dick off, only to both die after suffering for a month...

A good start. Though, I would have liked to have seen hubby do something about his wife's adulterous tryst. Too bad it was never finished.

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Pasqual

Waiting for the other story. Did he man up or wimp out. So far he's a wimp.

No wonder Shes doing other guys.

Why bother submitting a story if you can't finish it?

Your dog ate the last page?