All Comments on 'Feeding the Pack Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Wow...this is new...but promising! !

Ellienora35Ellienora35over 9 years ago
I am so interested in this

Please continue with this story

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 9 years ago
Tags incoming?

fisting gaping threesome eh? Well, that's to look forward to.

ariesgirlariesgirlover 9 years ago

Way to show her she is such a treasure by having her tied up like animal. They could have at least locked her in a room where she is a bit more comfortable. The alpha is telling her one thing but is treating her a different way. He sure is confusing but then again kidnappers don't think sensibly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Okay, the whole thing seems more than a little silly, but I actually do want to read more. Very hot idea, but really cannot read with a straight face. Please do give us more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
It is funny,

but it's cute.

Then does she get to milk Alpha?

Yummmmm

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

If he's not going to "damage" her, is he going to untie her hands, let her go piss, and then think to feed her? Somehow his lie doesn't ring true.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Bwahahaha!

So they kidnap her, tie her up painfully, threaten and terrorize her, assault her breasts, then expect her to provide them with breast milk. Really? That's too funny!

StrixalucoStrixalucoalmost 2 years ago

In a werewolf context this seems weird.

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