All Comments on 'Feel For Jack'

I'd rather go broke.

And a graduate from MIT can't get a job? Holy fuck, why not work in the oilpatch? Your hapless husband would make a fucking fortune. Your story is a series of idiotic subplots that don't make any sense.

Time to divorce the cheating cunt. It is obvious that Janet does not love her husband. She sucks off his boss, then masturbates while smelling and sucking his cum out of her panties. All I can say is Jack wasted a lot of time being faithful and should have been fucking Christine. His cheap sluty whore of a wife doesn't deserve him.

Still, without evidence, first thing in the morning I would go see a laywer and and file against a claim against this guy and the company along with papers for divorce. Even when the claims are rejected for lack of evidence, the rumors would fly and probably seriously affect his carreer. It wouldn't make any difference for his own employment since he was going to resign anyhow. The cheating wife, no matter what her real intentions were, would be history.

Dump the bitch

The sanctity of marriage vows or a better paying job?

A true loving, dedicated wife & husband would hold to all their vows: for richer or poorer, through sickness and health, foresaking ALL others, etc.; without these foundations and, the meaning & significance of them it's difficult to classify it as a marriage. So, I would say dump the adulteress (cheating slut) and find someone who would stand by you through thick & thin; hypothetically speaking, of course...

I love the people who take these stories SO literally. It's fantasy, people! I can only imagine what it must be like to sit next to them in a movie theater!

I enjoyed this story, and thank you for taking the time to write and post it. I found the overuse of proper nouns to be a little distracting, but otherwise, it was well written and flowed nicely.

Total crap.

Have you ever heard of finishing something? Because this was an unfinished pile of manure.

Your readers need the conclusion. You cannot just stop. Does Jack get the promotion? Do they divorce? Does he end up with Christine?

But everything is still hanging is he a man. and tells the "skank" to take a hike and take his Ex-Boss down as well. or a Cuck who grieves silently.

Sorry, I'd rather be a pauper or homeless with a faithful wife than a cunt like this saving my job and my "marriage" from a man stealing bitch. How does this character actually say that with a straight face being naked and having sex with another man. Then to have the orgasm of a lifetime by herself would have been the icing on the shit cake for me. Not blaming the author or taking it real, simply not believing it from my viewpoint. I'm sure there are people who has double standards like this, but I'd never be in a relationship with them. I have to agree, leaving it here is a cheap way to go. The set up is easy, resolving this is the real work.

A read.

Is there a light at the end of this tunnel?

The light at the end of this tunnel is the headlight of an oncoming train.

Time for Jack to bail out of this mess, he needs a new job and a new woman.

It's a stretch, but as one commenter said, and the rules Janet set, he could not have intercourse with her. So she has collected his semen in her panties in a sly way and after he leaves, pushes as much as she can up into her vagina, and is using poor man's insemination. I've heard it being done with a turkey baster. She thinks Jack will never know, and she is doing her part for him. I'm sure there is a conclusion coming.

First, I am about as far from being a professional writer as one can get, but I do enjoy writing and it’s great that Literotica provides amateurs like me with a place to post and share our work. Thanks to everyone that read and commented on this story. I appreciate all of the comments, both good and bad.

The idea for this story, and another submission of mine called ‘Tickle Tag’; were both started as an exercise I was using to develop a couple of sub plots in a larger story. Eventually each sub plot ended up taking on a life of its own and became a stories.

As many of the readers have noted in the comments, there needs to be a conclusion to this story. I agree with that completely. After I submitted ‘Feel for Jack’, I had hoped to be one of the first to comment on this story and let everyone know that the story had a second part, but the story posted much faster than I expected it to.

The conclusion is on its way. I originally had the conclusion include as part of this story, but the page count became too large for Literotica. I had to break the story into two parts. Once broken in two, I worked on editing the pieces independent of each other, finishing the beginning first.

If you want to know what happens, look for the sequel to this story called ‘Jack Grows a Pair’ in the next week or so. I have a little bit of editing left to do on this sequel, and then I will submit it. I also promise that in the future I will have every part of a story ready to go before I submit.

and the cheating, no matter her motives.

How is it that an MIT graduate engineer cannot find a tech job ?

Either he is very smart or his family is rich, MIT is not just another college.

I wanted to thank you for your long comment below. It is very nice of you to comment and tell us there will be a second part, although personally I believe this works as a stand-alone as well. Also, lots of people take time between installments, don't worry about it. Looking forward to the conclusion and your future writings!

you know, i never even HEARD of a man that caught his wife in the act of cheating and hid. never. why not just say "he saw his wife cheating and started shitting blue balloons and farting rainbows." it's just as ridiculous.

Leave this evil, conniving and cheating cunt behind. You've been true blue even with who you work with.

No, run Jack, run. Load your shit in your car and leave with those panties in a zip lock and leave them with your lawyer as you find another home in another State. Leave your new phone number with your lawyer and LEAVE.

not sure how her fucking the boss to get him a raise mitigates his anger or disappointment. Is cheating for noble reasons any less deplorable?

another cocksucking WIMP posting DUMB cuck SHIT.

Have to go to part two to see what Jack does now.

Withholding score until next chapter.

She hated the taste of cum but was tiffing the cum soaked panties as she got herself off. Odd. Maybe she gets off on the situation of being humiliated or forced to do another guy.

At least she was trying to get Jack's job back for him. That's what I call a sacrifice for her hubby.

Nothing more

No stop femdom fetish cuck fantasies. Useless in this LW category.

What idiot stands there and watches the whole thing? Why are all the males in your stories wimps?