All Comments on 'Feldare Tales: Oathtaker'

I really liked you're story. I hope you continue with this storyline. It would make for a good series. I loved it. See Ya

Wow! That was such a great story. You wrote the characters

3 dimensional and described their world and life excellently. There were a couple of grammatical errors, so you may want to use an editor in the future.

Bravo on this sexy fantasy tale!

This got to be one of the best fantasy stories I've read for a while. Erotic aside, it is well written and very captivating. The plot is well crafted, and the caracters are nicely done. Keep writing. I await more!

I've read quite a few of your stories now, and you, sir, are a true genius. I wait with baited breath for more!

It's so sweet! =) I want to marry an ogre now. I'd be a good wife. *nod nod* -Berry-

Thank you for this tremendous story! I've read a couple of your short Feldare tales today and totally love them. You provide so much detail in the settings and culture of your characters, and though there are some things I guess are of interest mostly to male readers [amount of semen and the detailed description of it, hmmm], you pay very much attention to the women's thoughts, reactions and pleasure. I like your strong female characters. I'm taking great pleasure reading this storis. It's rare to find something here that is both erotic and truly good writing. Thanks again :) / Mal

That was absolutely incredible. Bloody brilliant.