by mack_the_knife
Thank you for this tremendous story! I've read a couple of your short Feldare tales today and totally love them. You provide so much detail in the settings and culture of your characters, and though there are some things I guess are of interest mostly to male readers [amount of semen and the detailed description of it, hmmm], you pay very much attention to the women's thoughts, reactions and pleasure. I like your strong female characters. I'm taking great pleasure reading this storis. It's rare to find something here that is both erotic and truly good writing. Thanks again :) / Mal
It's so sweet! =) I want to marry an ogre now. I'd be a good wife. *nod nod* -Berry-
I've read quite a few of your stories now, and you, sir, are a true genius. I wait with baited breath for more!
This got to be one of the best fantasy stories I've read for a while. Erotic aside, it is well written and very captivating. The plot is well crafted, and the caracters are nicely done. Keep writing. I await more!
Wow! That was such a great story. You wrote the characters
3 dimensional and described their world and life excellently. There were a couple of grammatical errors, so you may want to use an editor in the future.
Bravo on this sexy fantasy tale!
I really liked you're story. I hope you continue with this storyline. It would make for a good series. I loved it. See Ya