All Comments on 'Female Centaur Academy Ch. 01'

Please continue with this tale, see real future possibilties

The sex scenes are really unclear - who is doing what to who, which centaurs are futanari, or is the human? There are too many names and the scenes move too quickly to keep track of them all. Are the centaurs fucking their centaur parts, or do they have human parts in the front of their bodies too? So unclear...

The story as a whole looks fine, a few typos here and there, but you really need to work on your descriptions. As you wrote it, it's like Forza appendage came out of nowhere (no build-up, no description) and Milia took it as if herm centaurs were as common as rocks. But then again, the story looks really promising and i m looking forward to the next chapters. However see if you could spend more time on descriptions and build-ups, i think it'd make your writing richer and easy to follow.