by HungryGuy
I love the concept of a bisexual Asian woman owning a fembot for her own house keeper and carpet-muncher as well as a hustler to attract horny men to her as well. Great fembot concept. I don't see any fembot ads on Literotica. Where can i get one? Do they take plastique or Pay-pal?
I like that you provided two point of views on your story. That's awesome ! But now I want to follow the rest of the story with Justin, Carol and Aerith ! I hope you'll write a sequel !
You built up a character to be an antagonist and instead tried to make him sympathetic despite obvious personality flaws. Pass.
Simply loved it! This thing is so well developed and well written that I feel like reading a commercial short-story.
The concept of a female robot giving the ultimate pleasure to the males of a more or less near future is not the first time appearing, but IT IS the first time that I've seen it so well executed.
My heartful thanks, and I hope to see more of your work in these series soon... :-)
IMO, those who make unjust accusations of racism where no racism exists are secretly ashamed of their own latent racism. To such people, the mere acknowledgment that differences exist among people is "racist." Well, it's not really my purpose to counter such ignorance.
To the rest of you who enjoyed my two fembot stories, the third of the triloogy is in the hopper. Please be patient :-)
The misogyny and Mickey Rooney stule racism aside, this story was so hideously unerotic it's turned the entire human race into an army of sexless drones. I'm pretty sure my eighty year old Grandma could write a sexier knitting pattern than this abomination. In all my years of reading erotica, I've never felt compelled to negatively comment- this story achieved it. Congratulations.
Thanks for the feedback! Now that Justin owns Carol, the next story in the series is in the works... Please be patient :-)
It started off as Carol's story, so what happened, were's her ending??????:(
This Ted was so dim that didn't realize Carol was for real, Shouldn't deserve the awesome ending. Plus, I'm partial to asian, so he got much better and now I'm angry at him.
:) I Think next chapter is Carol+Justin+Aerith... we'll see how this turns out!