All Comments on 'Femdom Future Ch. 01'

great tale loved it cant wait for more

Only one, major complaint: WAY too short. Slugged this one down in, like, five minutes, and was left wondering how long until the next installment(s) would arrive.

Other than that, seeker, just watch your punctuation, bro - specifically commas. :)

There are only two ways for you to 'get off the hook' with me for the brevity issue: either make each installment twice again as long, or post one of these tiny ones every other day, at most :)

Good work, though. Especially liked the fact that young John has slightly less than ZERO desire for contact with other males. ('Course, if the earth WERE, indeed, governed by a global, totalitarian Gynarchy, it's a good bet that it really wouldn't matter in the least HOW we fellows felt about Mistress' decision to indulge herself in the viewing of a bit of boy/boy action.) But, yecch!

Hurry w/ the next part, 'Seeker - PLEASE!

all4Her

this story seems like it has a good format i cant wait to see how it pans out

really nice

Great story. Keep writing!

I like this story -- I want o read what happens next!!