All Comments on 'Field Trip Follies Ch. 07'

So fucking hot. No other words do justice to how fucking good this story is, and it just keeps getting better and better.

I love this, baby. I really do. The whole idea of four friends sitting around naked in a hotel room together masturbating themselves into oblivion is one of the hottest scenes ever created. I really liked how you had Brandi, bust Alyson ogling her tits, and how you let us all know that Brandi's known all along that Alyson's a dyke. It lends credibility to the character. No popular girl that looks like you've described Alyson looking is going to go all the way to her senior year of high school and not have a boyfriend without making people wonder.

Didn't think I'd ever say that about a smut story, but your work is really good. I love how you work in other languages.

i have really been enjoying your stories but the last couple having the incest and taboo theme is turning me away, its a shame as i have enjopyed your stories. cant wait till you write the Camera stories again.

I havent been enjoying your change of tact..

anyway i will keep reading

My friend LAURIE has written a PREQUEL to Follies, featuring Dana Lee and Alyson from this story. Is very hot and sexy and required reading for all Follies fans! So please go over to Laurie's page and read it! Thanks! CB Summers

http://www.literotica.com/s/it-was-the-beginning-of-summer

Very well done. Can't wait to read the next chapter!