by swingerjoe
Don't care much for spanking and such , but at least there was no cheating. There's that.
If you're going to write BDSM stories at least put them in that category. This was just awful.
....because it was all in my head....
Cheap shot and a real let down from a fantasy high.
But if I could score it, I'd give it 4 stars.
Very, clean writing. You put us inside your character's mind with his internal dialog and led us along a very interesting experiential path.
Sadly, it all came to a halt, like a record player arm being pulled across the record with that characteristic "zippers" kind of scratch. Everybody stops, looks at the Di and and asks, "what?".
And like them, I feel slightly cheated. But it's good story telling....so I thank you.
From a couple that supposedly talks about everything to people who play BDSM games? I don't think so. It was obvious from the temperment and personality you gave her that she wasn't going for his game. And I felt the end would have been better served had he just turned around and went back to work when she refused. Too obvious, not clever and sure not entertaining. 1 star.
Nope, you didn't get it. Not even a little bit. Just move along to the next story.
HA, Ha, Ha....
Can't breathe........inhale!!!
Laugh quietly to myself.
I swear you wrote my wife in that story.
AMerryman
It sounded like the husband was disappointed he didn't get to humiliate and abuse his wife? She made herself available to him as a wife and lover, but not as some submissive brainless sex toy. But brainless submissive sex toy is what he prefers?
Sorry if I missed the plot, and the point. Really sorry for the wife if this is what her marriage has become.
Well told . It niggles at me the wife didn't trust the husband . Maybe an hour of unconditional surrender was a bit much .0 to 50 shades is a bit of a leap. The next level story involves role play , safe words , silk handkerchiefs and timer.
I like above all this writer's sense of humour...This story is easy to read , funny and with the necessary twist in the end...4*