All Comments on 'Fight for Freedom Ch. 02'

Just awful drivel.

I'm enyoing this story and am curious for how it's going to turn out. I'm glad you removed the snuff references, I understand wanting to up the stakes but the one in the first chapter was pretty jarring. The prose is nice, flows well, has good formatting. Not sure how to feel about the constantly switching pov's, not normally a fan of it but it does lend itself well to the scenario and I can't fault the use of it to deliver exposition on backstory in a more fluid manner.

Looking forward to reading more :)

5/5 stars

Enjoyed these first 2 chapters can't wait to see what you dream up next for these unforunate couples. I can think of a lot people I'd like to see the back of and they wouldn't have to be honeymooners.

But that is the most I can say for it. There is not a single character with whom I feel a connection. There is practically no plot.