All Comments on 'Finding His One'

by Chewie417

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Cat and mouse can be fun; however, this seemed muddled. She acted very much dominant and he the rattled submissive, then the undeveloped switch at the end. If it were just physical lustfull attracting them, the personality roles wouldn't matter. You seemed to be reaching for more but didn't give us enough to support it.

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