All Comments on 'Finding Ivy'

So, next installment will be soon? :-)

"collage" is a style of art.

"college" (with an 'e') is a place of higher learning.

"woman" is ONE adult female.

"women" (with an 'e') is MORE THAN ONE woman.

I couldn't read more than the first couple of paragraphs for all the errors.

-Rei

I will go back and fix this. I was not even sure people would read it.

So far the story has an intriguing start like to see how it goes.

Great start but please get help with editing and grammar!