All Comments on 'Finding Our Way Ch. 05 Epilogue'

what kind of trouble will john cause for them at work?

I so want that book2 you mentioned.

Till then Thank you

But now you should follow-up with how things work out. Do they stay together or do they break up. and Does Kim have any Children.

ive read this story before and found new chapters i have to say its a work of art my friend and cant wait for the next part to come out maybe mom and girlfriend get pregnant and its nice that son doesnt share mom with other guys thats a big turn off for me personally shows how much you love the people your writing about keep up the awsome writing and cant wait for more

I truly hope it wont be too long a wait for book 2. Again, Outstanding work !

It end so perfectly, I highly anticipate what's to come next. Damn fine work, thank you

The whole second book is already available to read under the title, "Finding Our Way Bk. 02"

:-)

Onlyfiction

Keep writing you are a talent.

To Anonymous' question, Book 2 is at the following location:

http://www.literotica.com/s/finding-our-way-bk-02

Enjoy!

Onlyfiction

I enjoyed the greatest read thus far. You are a very talented writer in my books keep up the great work.

loved it

the mother and the son should have been together and no kim was needed. i would have liked the story that way. however, the story was great.

Excellent. Love that the Kim thing got looped around and resolved - for the moment. In real this could last a long time if circumstances fell out right.

Somehow I knew Kim would figure in this, well done!

Enjoyed this series; however, I thought that you hurt the perfect incestuous love story by adding Kim to the mix and that the mother wanted/needed her. The entire series received a 5 star rating.

@Foxterot7a, read on through Bk 2. I explore these issues thoroughly therein.

The whole series was exceptional, beautifully written and invented. In my opinion, written very realistically. If Kim didn't come back, it's absolutely perfect, mother with son, etc .... It wasn't bad either, and I think it's a personal matter or everyone's preferences. As a whole, great 5 stars. Without Kim, it would be 6 stars.

Great story, when is the next episode?

Enjoyed reading the story, (my opinion), it would've been better without Kim at the end, maybe she left after dropping kev back home and she then left, maybe find a new boyfriend (with smallerdick to fit her better),

Maybe kev and his mom found out she was pregnant with her second baby (kev being the 1st), so they moved to a new area to live in, maybe a nice log cabin to live in where nobody else would have know them. Fresh start as a couple with a family.

Unbridled sex, brilliantly described & fantastically set up to create a full blooded story with characters who simply enjoy a fabulous fuck focused romp. Magic stuff.

I'm gonna bite my tongue 'til i read Book 2. I've got a technical issue or two that is probably best broached then. TTFN!

Well, it was certainly hot with them all together, but if I were Kevin I wouldn't let their deception go unmentioned, or unpunished. Go ahead and fuck the shit out of them, but then tell em the deception was unacceptable, and they'll have to do a lot of begging to get back in good graces, and then if it ever happens again, they've been warned, and it would be over. They changed the whole relationship dynamic without giving him any input. That is a terrible way to start a new relationship, and he should not just let that go.

I'm an old fashion guy. I don't need more than 1 good woman whom I love madly. And I also would breed my woman. She would give me as many babies as her 42 year old body could give me.

I would never cheat on her. I would be devoted to her. I would cherish her and I would be the best husband and the best father to our children.