All Comments on 'Finding the One Ch. 03'

Love your work but this would have been better as just one long entry.... or even halving the number of chapters to eight would have helped. Single page chapters are a little annoying.

Thanks for your feedback. I'll keep that in mind for future stories and submissions.

you are a good writer and the story is interesting but one page chapter is a waste of time unless the reader is just looking for a quick rub seccion. i have read stories of 30 pages long and i prefer that to wait another week for another one page story. but at the end its just my opinion. you do you

Many thanks for your feedback. I highly appreciate your input.

As this story is already finished, and the short chapters are part of the intended structure, I'm afraid there is not much I can or want to do about it.

But I take your input and most likely will have longer chapters in future publications, also because I think it suits my style better.

But as my favourite author Stephen King once said in a prologue (by meaning, not by word): A short story is like a stolen kiss, a promise for more, while a novel is a full blown love affair.

I don't understand why Melissa thinks he owed her a call before he went to a public club? In any case, she would be dead to me.

I'm mildly curious what will happen to our socially dysfunctional hero. I enjoyed the story about the nephew. I'd like to see Melissa frustrated and ignored. Seems the females in your story we know almost nothing about.

Unless you really want the mix to settle or even ferment these short chapters are less fun than longer ones.

Even though I agree with previous comments on

the short length of these chapters. Keep writing

and I' ll keep reading and enjoying.

Well written, well edited and intriguing. I'll read on and see what happens

I understand the series is finished. I've read your justification for submitting mini chapters. After reading this far and looking at the comments section may I suggest that you may run the risk of providing opportunities for multiple low scores posted in frustration?

Sex but no romance. Short chapter unfortunately. 5 *

In defense of the author's decision to post short chapters: every chapter so far (admittedly only three) has had the appropriate story arc for a chapter. The divisions are logical, and it is therefore perfectly appropriate to post them as they are. If the author weren't posting the chapters in this length, then the appropriate method would be to post the story as a single unit, which would mean a story of (if the current pattern holds) about 10-14 pages -- not too long, but long enough that a lot of people would recognize the internal structure and complain that it wasn't posted in shorter chapters. It is possible that there are larger story arcs that would justify combining two, three, or four chapters, but after only these three chapters, we don't know that, so these complaints are currently inappropriate.