Finding the One Ch. 03

In defense of the author's decision to post short chapters: every chapter so far (admittedly only three) has had the appropriate story arc for a chapter. The divisions are logical, and it is therefore perfectly appropriate to post them as they are. If the author weren't posting the chapters in this length, then the appropriate method would be to post the story as a single unit, which would mean a story of (if the current pattern holds) about 10-14 pages -- not too long, but long enough that a lot of people would recognize the internal structure and complain that it wasn't posted in shorter chapters. It is possible that there are larger story arcs that would justify combining two, three, or four chapters, but after only these three chapters, we don't know that, so these complaints are currently inappropriate.

Sex but no romance. Short chapter unfortunately. 5 *

I understand the series is finished. I've read your justification for submitting mini chapters. After reading this far and looking at the comments section may I suggest that you may run the risk of providing opportunities for multiple low scores posted in frustration?

Well written, well edited and intriguing. I'll read on and see what happens

Even though I agree with previous comments on

the short length of these chapters. Keep writing

and I' ll keep reading and enjoying.