All Comments on 'Fiona Gets Called In To School'

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ForebodingForebodingover 10 years ago
Good, but confusing

This is part 1 of this series and I have no idea why Fiona is being controlled by this guy (you never mention his name) and I'm not sure why he gets off on humiliating her. If all of the Fiona stories are related, it might help to mention in what order to read them. Also, we might feel her humiliation more if it were her point of view.

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