All Comments on 'Fiona Pt. 01'

Lots of places to go with this one.

But boy are you in a hurry.

She was all those years at a female only school and never felt sexual attraction?

Sorry but puberty does not work that way.

But this IS fiction so I guess a certain license is allowable!

DAMN, DOES JUST A COFFEE AND A BAGEL COST THAT MUCH OVER THERE? DAMN, GLAD I LIVE IN THE U.S. GOOD STORY THOUGH, lol AND DAMN, IF I WERE A FEMALE I'D WANNA LIVE OVER THERE, SEEMS AS THOUGH THE MENS ROLE HAS BEEN ON THE DECLINE FOR YEARS AND THE WOMEN JUST WANT TO EAT PUSSY! INTERESTING.

Alice?

Also...you like apostrophes far too much.

Nice story though.

Thanks for the positive comments. Am a bit confused by the "Alice" comment. Alice is one of my stories, couldnt find reference to her in "Fiona."

You went between Alice and Fiona multiple times in this story. It got a bit confusing. Good start though

Once early, more later. Context indicated it was Fiona, but it was like a big speed bump...?

Apologies for character mix up. I am in the middle of writing a complex story involving “Alice”.

Absolutely red hot. Cunt crazed fucker Lanc’s UK.