All Comments on 'First A Brown Eyed Girl Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Very hot

Great story, write another chapter soon please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
well done

great detail and build up. you didn't just jump into the sex of it. your approach added a much appreciated sensuality and heightened my own arousal as I read. please promise a second chapter!

SatyrDickSatyrDickabout 2 years ago

Very Romantic and Erotic.

10/10!!!!!

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