All Comments on 'First A Brown Eyed Girl Ch. 01'

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SatyrDickSatyrDickabout 2 years ago

Very Romantic and Erotic.

10/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
well done

great detail and build up. you didn't just jump into the sex of it. your approach added a much appreciated sensuality and heightened my own arousal as I read. please promise a second chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Very hot

Great story, write another chapter soon please.

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