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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Have you never heard of punctuation?7297

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great Story But

You need an editor to take car of the mechanics of the story: quotations, grammar, and such. Otherwise, a good series of stories.

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