All Comments on 'First Dawn'

by Winterloverm

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DianeRedfernDianeRedfernabout 8 years ago
Wet and Wild but Why So Short?

Loved it - very visual and lots of marvelous sexy action - but you obviously have so much more to tell. Please write more.

xoxo,

Di

steffiewolfordsteffiewolfordabout 8 years ago
Will there be more

I enjoyed your story hope you follow it up

dfwcd22dfwcd22about 8 years ago
Well Done!

I really hope there's more coming!!

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