All Comments on 'First Middle Aged Swing Ch. 01'

by Wesley Omand

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RealDocRealDocabout 16 years ago
YEAAAA!!!

Fat folks love sex to. How about a chapter two asap please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
This Is About As Interesting As A Huge Zit

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
My God!

Another middle aged English fag that wants to tell us what a better man is doing to his wife, Yikes!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Nice

Certainly worth the read and better than the negative reviews.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Good start, Wesley

Potentially some interesting characters. Looking forward to where this is going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
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A good read. Not cluttered with physical details, just enough to hold the interest. A little short for a first chapter. Stopped too soon and a hint as to weather it is true or not would add some excitment. Why a four year delay between writtings?

KevstaKevstaabout 16 years ago
A taste of reality! Love it!

And it's British too! This is fiction at it's best, when you are not sure if it is a story, or a real life situation being recounted. Go for it! Cant wait for part two!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
My God; this is great!

I really enjoyed this and the fact it's set in an environment/age group and circumstances I can identify with. (It's great to read a story with no mention of hot tubs, log cabins, high school sweethearts and sophomores, pants [instead of trousers], asses instead of arses and parking lots!)

I have taken the liberty of changing the location and names of the characters to involve people I know etc.

More please and soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Totally realistic

You have a way of writing that makes me feel as if I were there, and then makes me wish I were there. Keep up the hot work! Pieater

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Enjoyed the titilation very much

Good to hear others are in a similar situation with a wife who needs more but hangs back from shyness. Pity for Wesley that Jill wasn't a more sexy woman. Hope they are all humping each other madly and often.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
so nice

that's a great story. for us that not how we got started . but we do have that life style now at 60 years old it great.

ct27nzct27nzover 8 years ago
Very good start to a story - looking forward to chapter 2

Title says it all, really. This chapter ends as the first meeting between the couples is poised for take-off. I wonder who slept where, and who said what over the breakfast table.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More please

A great start to what I'm sure will be a great series chronicling your adventures

StoneyLodgeStoneyLodgeabout 1 year ago

Gee whiz -- talk about anti-climactic -- such a great start and then no sequel since 2008? WTF?

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I suggested swinging or a nudist holiday to my wife Lisa after our sex life had become stale,she was a bit surprised but due to the few threesomes we had had before we had kids it seemed to awaken something inside her,a trip to a nudist resort was the first thing we tried and we got friendly with a much older couple than us,Brian and Susan were celebrating Brian's 65th birthday,we just hit it off with each other and after way to many drinks,Susan asked us back to their cabin,with our inhibitions gone our answer was of course! Brian asked me if we had tried swapping and to his surprise I said no but we had talked about it and that was the reason we were here, Lisa would be very popular with the guys here Brian told me, I asked him about him and Susan and he said that he loves watching her fuck other men! We got back to their cabin and Brian told Susan that we were new to the scene! Don't be so forward Susan said to him apologising to Lisa! He's not sorry at all Lisa said look at his dick! I was shocked by what she said! Brian's cock was rock hard as he stood in the kitchen,isn't this what we talked about babe Lisa said to me? Didn't take you long Lisa! Susan said to her,Susan put her drink down and played with Brian's balls,Lisa smiled to me before joining her wanking his cock, Brian kissed both women then smirked at me squeezing Lisa's arse cheeks! Your wife has a great arse mate, in what seemed like seconds Brian manoeuvred Lisa over the worktop and began fucking my wife infront of me, Lisa was loving it and Susan encouraged her husband to fuck her,Susan asked me if I liked watching Lisa getting fucked? Yes I answered playing with my cock, you two are naturals she said walking towards me, even though she was in her mid 60's she was one sexy lady,her tits were huge and her hairy pussy had me engrossed! My cock was in her mouth as I watched her husband fucking my wife, she bent down infront of me telling me to put my cock in her pussy! Of course I did as she asked,it opened mine and Lisa's eyes to older couples,there's nothing better trust me

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