All Comments on 'First Night'

by JayDiver

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
WOW

Just fucking awesome. Well done!

Pinupfan53Pinupfan53over 6 years ago
I second the WOW

That was great. I hope you have more adventures to tell us

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
rubbish

Bla Bla Bla,,,the first 3 pages are worth crap...one of the most boring "H" stories ever. Next time please stick to important things

brian_scoobybrian_scoobyover 2 years ago

Nice… very nice!!! Well written! Thanks

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Since this is labeled a biography page I thought I'd updated and include an incognito biography that might explain some of my writing style, and stumbling grammar. Plus I'm struggling with writers block and boredom. I was born in the fall of the year at the exact midpoint of t...