All Comments on 'First-time Adulteress'

Smart and sensual erotic entertainment. I've read it with great delight, especially the bubbly dialogues. You created very livelily characters. Keep on writing.

<p>Thank you</p>

<b>Nucleus</b>

Not sure I really liked a woman being so blatantly a slut until I read her husband had a stable of fillies. How does she propose to inform her husband she now has a live in lover who is working for their company? That might be a bit tough for him to take. Also being in that type of company and on so large of a property I would expect to find security cameras outside as well as inside. He will have proof of her adultry if he wants it for divorce action.

Well done, I really appreciate a well written story. Time was taken to build the characters and lay down a plausible background. A believable story and very interesting to read.........Thanks, it is a pleasure to read the work from someone that pays attention to the little things that make a story a cut above the rest......Rich

reading the classifieds are more entertaining than this

I thought it was a hot little cheating tale, but they show every sign of getting stupid about it.

It seemed to be going nowhere so I stopped reading and rated it 1*.

Even the classifieds are more interesting. They at least have puppy ads.

The repartee between them was pretty steamy. Soft subtle innuendo rather than being beaten over the head with a yelling and screaming husband.

People like 26thNC who has never had a story published on here has the audacity to compare the story to reading the classifieds.

What a strange guy.