All Comments on 'First Time Together'

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RustyghRustyghabout 7 years ago
TooLong?

This story is definitely not too long. But it was long and hot enough to get my fire caught. I'd love to coax more out of you........stories, that is. I like your taste, it suits mine to a t.

BuildaworldBuildaworldabout 7 years agoAuthor

Thank you so much. I hope to continue this storyline further and introduce a few new characters too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Not too long

It definitely wasn't too long. It was actually a little short for me, but the story was great.

busz690busz690about 7 years ago
Great

Super start keep it up

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