All Comments on 'Five Friends at the Nude Spa'

Very well done.

Great story. Great build-up to a fun finish. The anticipation, the apprehension, and even the slight terror inside four of the characters was well presented. Kat was the perfect antagonist!

Really good story and thoroughly enjoyed. Excellently written to capture the imagination.

So sweet! Keep writing, you're doing a great job!!

True love exposed between three wonderfully shameless couples, I love happy endings... no pun intended...

I'm happy to note that this story has received some nominations for the Clitorides Awards, for stories published last year (in 2017). If you read and enjoyed it, I hope you will consider adding your vote at https://clitoridesawards.org/. Thanks everyone for your support!

This one really kept me hooked. I sensed where it was going as was gratified to read it did not disappoint. Very similar in style and context to some of my own work which means I will now have to stop being so lazy and do my own nude spa story soon!

#inspired to write

"No inappropriate behavior" indeed. The tension and the build up was great. The different levels of apprehension in all the characters was really well done.

@TJA Thanks-- Indeed, I'm digging your like-minded submissions. Would love to see you tackle a nude spa scenario!

@LoquiSordidaAdMe Thanks for reading this! That apprehension is definitely a trigger for me, and I'm really happy you liked the execution on that. Really appreciate your feedback!

"...my penis flopped out. Jim did the same. We stuffed them in the locker." Ouch!

"The two female masseuses arrived as expected and gave us massages in turns."

All masseuses are female. Masseurs are male.

That was quite the event, ticks all the boxes for a great story for me. Love your portrayal of their timidity doing the nude spa.

good idea and writing everyone but Kat seems very naïve or nearly a virgin

It was exactly as one would imagine. Every one not sure but wanting to see everything.

And it was great to see that someone in the party was a bit of a instigator!

Loved it!!! Gave it five stars. I can see a sequel to this, maybe a girlfriend swap or a 'later in life' group get together.

That's done the job! Very hot.

Nice story. My primary comment is that during the first part, Adam miraculously knew what everyone was thinking and everyone was thinking the same thing. Not realistic. But you corrected that for th e rest of the story. Nicely done.