All Comments on 'Five Hundred'

You should have written these stories as a sequence. It is so dificult to find the actual thread loking for them by date of submission. Good sex. Good Master/Slave relations ships. Good words, what else can I say.

good start, but this story is not finished by far ...

It was a hot and frightening (as a sub) build up. It's exciting and made me feel for the sub, as I tend to be one, and get the physical reactions I might get if I were in her shoes. However, I agree with another commenter that there should be more. It appears there are follow ups? --I'll have to look for them. =)

Dump his abusive ass. That's not play - that's severe physical abusive. Jail may be necessary for him.

Seems to be an excessive jump in punishment. I don't have a problem with the basic elements, but yellow is generally used as 'slow down' or 'let's talk.' It is not a get out of punishment word. HE took the switch out of the activity without additional discussion and now is going to punish her for his choice? And he had planted the fear of the switch-I think intentionally. Discussion and additional switching seems more appropo. Punishment and pushing the boundries of her fear. The choices he has given are extreme for the situation. If this is supposed to instill in her to 'trust' his initial punishment choice, idk. I would not be inclined to be thankful for that lesseon.

Is there more to the story?